Sunday, July 10, 2005

he badly wanted to write a poem
he did not have a theme to reflect
he did not have the words to pen
he did not have the thoughts to express
but just a want to write

first para went like above
didnt know how to fill the second
searching for words, complex words
he was still struggling
may be it was a bad idea to write

he felt ashamed, not being expressive
being thoughtless and numb
but then he didnt care, he didnt want to
he has a different territory, poetry was not his
just thoughts wont do, just words wont do

he stopped writing that poem. not anymore.


Kasthuri Srinivasan said...

Superbu ! I should start writing one too ! Probably you can have a theme that says a poem that inspires everyone to write a poem. :-)

keerthi said...

Thanks Kasthuri Srinivasan. But does it inspire, really ??

Narayanan Venkitu said...

Probably one of the best poems I've been impressed with in recent times.

1) Practical
2) Simple
3) Very readable

People might have different views but that's what I like.!

Hat's you..I hope you write more and more of such Practical poems.

I've learnt by experience ( thru blogs mostly) that once you start writing poems, you look at things that a poem can be born.!

Good work Keerthi and thanks for letting me know.!

tt_giant said...

nice on keerthi..

but one small thing: what does the last line mean?.. u negating the sentence purposefully??

Adaengappa !! said...

Keep writing atleast once a while !!
A commendable effort !! Kudos...

thennavan said...

Keerthi, kavidhai ezhuduvadarku karpanai thevai illai
ezhuththum thevai illai
aattralum thevai illai
aasai irundaale podhumaanadhu :-)

Ram.C said...

good debut keerthi

keep trying, it will come out.. same as me.

iraikka iraikka thaan kinatril neer oorum.

keerthi said...

Prabhu Thanks a lot.. :)

thennavan, kalakkitteenga ponga.. idhuthaan vara maatenguthu enakku :(

Ram.C, you are a pro dude.. anyway, iraithu paarkaren.

keerthi said...

venkittu sir, Im embarassed. But if you meant it really, thanks a lot. :) You guys are my Illustrations and examples.

deepak, No No !! Not intentional. Does it sound like im quitting blogging ?? (by any chance, huh !)

வெங்கி / Venki said...

எண்ணத்தை வார்த்தைகளாய் வாக்கியங்களில் வடித்தால் வாசிக்கும் ஒருவருக்கு கஷ்டமாக இருக்கும் என்பதால் என் எண்ணங்களை வார்த்தைகளாய் ஒன்றின் கீழ் ஒன்றாய் அடுக்கி கவிதை என்று சொல்லிக் கொள்கிறேன். கொஞ்சம் எதுகை மோனையோடு. என்னுடையது கவிதை எனில் உங்களுடையதும் கவிதை தான். என்னைப் பொருத்தவரை, சொல்ல வந்த விஷயத்தை புரியும்படி சொல்லிவிட்டால் நாம் கவிதை எழுதிவிட்டோம் என்றே நினைப்பேன். அதை நீங்கள் மிக அழகாக செய்து இருக்கிறீர்கள். வாழ்த்துக்கள். தொடரட்டும் உங்கள் முயற்சி.

"சித்திரமும் கைப்பழக்கம், செந்தமிழும் நாப்பழக்கம்"

keerthi said...

WOW ! Venki. Thanks a lot.
Thats sheer encouragement.

as you said
"சித்திரமும் கைப்பழக்கம், செந்தமிழும் நாப்பழக்கம்"

Phoenix said...

Awesome man...
Like your thought process in this post !

keerthi said...

hey, Thanks Phoenix.
I can imagine, how you imagined - how i imagined when i wrote this.